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素质教育篇
（一）
根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
假如你是李华，你们学校正在开展“安全月”宣传活动，倡议大家制作关于安全教育的主题海报，你们班交换生peter给你发邮件询问相关事情。请用英语回复一封邮件，告诉他海报上交的时间，并分享你设计海报的一些想法。
提示词语：design，safety
rule，careful，protect，picture
提示问题：when
should
you
hand
in
the
poster?what
would
you
like
to
share
with
peter
about
designing
the
poster?
dear
peter,
i＇m
glad
to
receive
your
email
______________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
if
there
is
anything
more
that
i
can
help
with,
please
let
me
know.
yours,
li
hua
【写作思路】
这篇作文要求我们以李华的身份给peter写一封邮件，告诉他关于制作关于安全教育的主题海报的相关事宜。由题目中给出的提示问题可知，短文中应包括以下内容：首先告诉peter海报上交的时间；然后和他分享一些设计海报的想法。第二个内容应该是短文的主体。题目中并没有规定具体的写作内容，学生们应联系自己的实际生活，展开合理的想象，将这些内容补充完整后，用正确的英语表达出来，这是写作中的一个难点。短文应以一般现在时为主、第一、二人称来叙述。写作时应注意：首先要合理安排短文内容，叙述应有层次、有条理。可以使用一些表示先后顺序的词或短语，如first,
second,
last
but
not
least等等。题目中给出的提示词应该在短文中用上。其次应注意文章的表达，英语句式的结构与汉语是不同的，因此不能根据汉语思维逐词翻译，应该从句式的整体考虑，先确定主干结构，然后添加修饰成分。为提升作文档次，应注意使用一些高级词汇、短语以及复合句、非谓语动词等复杂结构。同时语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意上下连贯，表达流畅。
【满分范文】
dear
peter,
i＇m
glad
to
receive
your
email.
as
it
is
required，you
are
supposed
to
hand
in
the
poster
before
next
friday.
being
your
close
friend，i
am
extremely
willing
to
share
some
ideas
about
designing
the
poster
with
you.
first
and
foremost，the
basic
safety
rules
are
of
great
importance，which
should
be
included
in
your
poster.
in
the
second
place，following
the
safety
rules
is
so
meaningful
and
crucial
that
you
had
better
remind
your
readers
of
its
significance
and
advise
them
to
be
careful
both
in
and
out
of
school.
last
but
by
no
means
least，if
i
were
you，i
would
add
a
few
suggestions
about
safety
awareness，considering
that
better
safe
than
sorry.
in
addition，it
is
a
good
idea
for
you
to
draw
a
few
pictures
on
your
poster
so
as
to
make
it
more
lively
and
acceptable.
if
there
is
anything
more
that
i
can
help
with,
please
let
me
know.
yours,
li
hua
【名师点评】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，给peter写邮件，告诉他制作主题海报的一些事情。短文有以下几个优点：首先文章内容完整，结构清晰，符合题目要求。除题目中给出的开头和结尾，短文主要包括两个内容：第一段用一句话告诉peter上交海报的时间；文章的中心和重点是放在了第二段上，这一段中作者和peter分享了一些制作海报的想法。主要从四个方面进行阐述，内容非常详实，并使用了first
and
foremost,
in
the
second
place,
last
but
by
no
means
least,
in
addition等短语，分清了这一段的层次，叙述非常有条理。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确，并使用了较复杂的句式结构，表现了作者较强的语言运用能力。短文中较好的句型有：being
your
close
friend，i
am
extremely
willing
to
share
some
ideas
about
designing
the
poster
with
you.、in
the
second
place，following
the
safety
rules
is
so
meaningful
and
crucial
that
you
had
better
remind
your
readers
of
its
significance
and
advise
them
to
be
careful
both
in
and
out
of
school、in
addition，it
is
a
good
idea
for
you
to
draw
a
few
pictures
on
your
poster
so
as
to
make
it
more
lively
and
acceptable.等。
（二）
日前某校进行了题为“有压力向谁说”的问卷调查（结果如图），请你根据要求写一篇英语短文参加该校的征文活动。向老师倾诉
向朋友倾诉
向家长倾诉
不跟任何人说
内容包括：1.
简要描述调查结果；
2.
你喜欢向谁倾诉压力？为什么？
3.
提出2条缓解压力的建议。
要求：1.
文章必须包括所给要点，但不要逐条翻译，可进行适当拓展；
2.
书写规范，80—100词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3.
文中不得出现真实校名、人名。
when
teens
have
stress,
they
will
talk
about
their
stress
to
different
people.
here
are
the
results
about
our
survey.
______________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【满分范文】
when
teens
have
stress,
they
will
talk
about
their
stress
to
different
people.
here
are
the
results
about
our
survey.
thirty-five
percent
of
students
will
talk
about
their
stress
to
their
teachers,
forty
percent
of
students
will
talk
to
their
friends,
only
fifteen
percent
of
students
talk
to
their
parents
but
only
ten
percent
of
students
talk
to
nobody.
for
me,
i
like
to
tell
my
friends
about
the
pressure,
because
we
are
all
the
same
age,
they
sometimes
feel
the
same
as
us
.and
we
can
communicate
with
and
understand
each
other
easily.
but
as
a
student,
we
should
learn
to
relieve
stress.
first
of
all,
we
should
properly
face
the
pressure.?stress
is
everywhere
in
our
daily
life,
so
we
can＇t
be
afraid
of
them
and
try
our
best
to
deal
with
them.
secondly,
we
can
listen
to
light
music
or
do
some
proper
sports,
which
can
let
us
relax.
finally,
believe
in
yourself.
we
should
believe
in
ourselves.
we
can
deal
with
any
trouble
with
the
help
of
ourselves
or
others.
stress
is
everywhere
and
we
must
face
the
pressure
properly.
【解析】
1.
题干解读：本篇文章属于话题性＋图表型作文，根据图表内容说明不同的人对压力的诉说对象不同的情况，文中会较多的使用数字说明，做一个对比，然后阐述自己的压力喜欢对谁说以及原因，并且提出该如何缓解压力的几条建议。建议可以从自身实际出发，自己平时是如何缓解压力的可以一起分享。
2.
例文点评：文章采取三段式，第一段对图表内容进行阐述，以及阐述自己喜欢向谁诉说压力和为什么？第二段主要给出一些缓解压力的建议，第三段做一个总结，概括压力无处不在，但是要正视压力。文章结构完整。段落衔接很好，语言表达清晰准确，语句简单易懂。
3.
高分亮点：
短语：talk
about；the
same
as；communicate
with；deal
with；be
afraid
of。
句型：so引导的并列句；because引导的原因状语从句；
（三）
xxxx呼吁：“共同呵护好孩子的眼睛,让他们拥有一个光明的未来”,为此,学校
广播站邀请你写一篇关于保护视力的倡议书,请根据以下信息写一篇文章：
现
状
1.
越来越多的孩子带上了眼镜；2.
超过
70%的初中生近视；3.
父母和老师为此担忧；
原
因
1.
学习；2.
电子产品；3.
缺少睡眠；
建
议
1.
每天至少做两次眼保健操；
2.
多进行户外运动；
3.
健康饮食；
……
视力差：have
poor
eyesight
要求：
1.
所写内容必须包括以上表格提供的所有信息,并适当发挥；
2.
文章不少于
90
词,开头已给出,不计入总词数；
3.
语意通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范；
4.
文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。
poor
eyesight
is
a
serious
problem
among
the
youth
of
our
country.
it’s
amazing
that
the
situation
is
going
from
bad
to
worse.
it
is
time
that
we
take
the
problem
seriously.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【满分范文】
poor
eyesight
is
a
serious
problem
among
the
youth
of
our
country.
it’s
amazing
that
the
situation
is
going
from
bad
to
worse.
it
is
time
that
we
take
the
problem
seriously.
at
present,
more
and
more
students
wear
glasses,
over
70
%
of
the
middle
school
students
have
poor
eyesight.
both
parents
and
teachers
are
worried
about
it.
here
are
some
main
causes.
first,
some
students
spend
too
much
time
reading
or
doing
their
homework
without
a
rest.
second,
some
students
even
like
to
watch
tv
or
use
computers
for
a
long
time.third,
some
students
may
not
have
enough
sleep.
in
order
to
have
good
eyesight,
we
should
do
eye
exercises
at
least
twice
a
day.
we
can
also
try
to
do
more
sports
in
our
spare
time.
we
had
better
eat
healthy
food.
of
course,
it
is
important
to
have
a
good
habit
of
using
our
eyes.
for
example,
we
shouldn’t
read
in
the
sun
or
in
bed.
i
think
all
of
us
should
understand
the
importance
of
protecting
eyes
and
try
our
best
to
protect
them.
【解析】
题干分析：这是一篇要求写一篇关于保护视力的倡议书，响应xxxx呼吁：“共同呵护好孩子的眼睛,让他们拥有一个光明的未来”，观察提示表格，写作内容要包括目前的现在，还有产生这些问题的原因，已经提出的相关建议。
例文点评：这是一篇优秀的例文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确的运用的时态，例文中运用的是一般现在时。例文第一段首先提出了目前我国青少年视力不良的社会问题；第二段详细的介绍了产生问题的三点原因；第三段提出有效的建议，号召保护视力。例文还使用了一些亮点词句，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。
高分亮点：
短语：at
present目前；more
and
more越来越多；be
worried
about担心；too
much太多；like
to
do
sth喜欢做某事；in
order
to
sth为了做某事；at
least至少；try
one’s
best
to
do
sth尽某人最大努力做某事；eye
exercises眼保健操；in
one’s
spare
time在某人空闲时间。
句型：（1）first,
some
students
spend
too
much
time
reading
or
doing
their
homework
without
a
rest.
sb.
spend
time
(in)
doing
sth某人花费时间做某事；（2）of
course,
it
is
important
to
have
a
good
habit
of
using
our
eyes.
it
is
adj.
(for
sb.)
to
do
sth(对某人来说)做某事时怎样的。
（四）
假如你是李华，你的表妹lily面对即将到来的期末考试，压力很大，这几天甚至出现了失眠的状况，请你给她写一封电子邮件，帮助她尽快调整好状态迎接考试。
提示词：
relaxed；
music；
exercise；
believe
in
要求:
1.
参考提示词,可适当发挥
2.
语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整；
3.
文中不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名、地名等)
4.
词数：不少于70词。(开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。)
dear
lily,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
yours,li
hua
【满分范文】
dear
lily,
i＇m
sorry
that
i
heard
from
you.
i
think
proper
pressure
is
normal,
because
exams
are
important
for
us.
this
happened
to
me.
let
me
tell
you
about
my
advice.
you
can
do
something
you
like
to
relax
yourself.
for
example,
i
like
to
listen
to
music
because
some
soft
music
can
help
us
relax.
i
exercise
regularly
to
increase
my
ability
to
work
under
pressure.
we
have
to
learn
to
believe
in
ourselves.
if
you
think
these
suggestions
is
good
for
you
,you
can
have
a
try.
i
hope
my
suggestions
can
help
you.
yours,li
hua
【解析】
1.题干解读：该题目属于信件写作，要求根据来信写回信，信件内容应该完整地给出相关建议，帮助她尽快调整好状态迎接考试。适当使用副词和连词等增加亮点。写好时，再阅读一遍，减少语法错误，不要犯单词拼写上的错误。
2.例文点评：这是一篇优秀的例文，完整地给出相关缓解考试压力的建议，避免出现累赘。例文结构清晰，行文连贯，恰当地运用了副词和连词等用以过渡，增强了整篇文章的逻辑关系。
3.高分亮点：词组：heard
from；proper
pressure；my
advice；relax
yourself；soft
music；exercise
regularly；believe
in
ourselves；is
good
for等；
句型：
i
think
proper
pressure
is
normal,
because
exams
are
important
for
us.
/let
me
tell
you
about
my
advice./for
example,
i
like
to
listen
to
music
because
some
soft
music
can
help
us
relax.
/if
you
think
these
suggestions
is
good
for
you
,you
can
have
a
try
./i
hope
my
suggestions
can
help
you.
【点睛】
书面表达：
首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如heard
from；proper
pressure；my
advice；relax
yourself；soft
music；exercise
regularly；believe
in
ourselves；等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅，如however；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
（五）
今年3月5号学雷锋纪念日，你校组织志愿者去夕阳红敬老院开展“学雷锋，送温暖”活动。假如你是学生张华，请将活动情况介绍给你的美国笔友ben，分享这次美好的经历。
活动时间
3月5日
活动地点
夕阳红敬老院（xiyanghong
nursing
home)
参加人员
学校志愿者活动内容
1.
送鲜花和水果
2.帮助打扫卫生
3.……
活动感想
1.关爱和尊重老人2.
……..要求：
(1)表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
(2)必须包括表格中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥；
(3)词数：100左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
(4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
dear
ben,
thank
you
for
your
last
email.
let
me
tell
you
what
we
did
in
our
school
on
march
5.
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
i＇d
like
to
hear
about
volunteering
work
in
your
school.
best
wishes,
zhang
hua
【满分范文】
dear
ben,
thank
you
for
your
last
email.
let
me
tell
you
what
we
did
in
our
school
on
march
5.
as
soon
as
we
got
to
xiyanghong
nursing
home,
people
there
gave
us
a
warm
welcome.
the
elderly
people
were
very
excited
to
see
us.
we
brought
some
flowers
and
fruits
to
them.
then,
we
cleaned
the
windows
and
swept
the
floor
for
them.
after
that,
some
of
us
took
a
walk
with
them,
chatted
with
each
other
and
some
of
us
played
chess
with
them.
when
it
was
time
for
us
volunteers
to
leave,
they
were
thankful
for
our
kindness
and
they
felt
somewhat
sad.
i
promise
to
myself
that
i
will
go
to
see
them
whenever
i＇m
free.
we
should
care
for
the
elderly
people
and
respect
them.
i＇d
like
to
hear
about
volunteering
work
in
your
school.
best
wishes,
zhang
hua
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文，你校组织志愿者去夕阳红敬老院开展“学雷锋，送温暖”活动。假如你是学生张华，请将活动情况介绍给你的美国笔友ben，分享这次美好的经历。。首先要认真审题，根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。
2.例文点评：本文时态为一般过去时态，人称主要为第一人称。文章紧扣题目要点，内容完整，表述准确，语言的表述符合语法的结构，造句符合英语的表达习惯。
3.高分亮点：
短语：as
soon
as
；
get
to；give
sb.
a
warm
welcome；bring
sth.
to
sb.；take
a
walk
with
sb.；be
thankful
for…
句型：as
soon
as
we
got
to
xiyanghong
nursing
home,
people
there
gave
us
a
warm
welcome.；when
it
was
time
for
us
volunteers
to
leave,
they
were
thankful
for
our
kindness
and
they
felt
somewhat
sad.
（六）
寒假即将来临，你一定有你的寒假计划吧？你校英语俱乐部开展了以“my
plan
for
the
winter
holiday”为主题的征文活动，请根据下面的思维导图，写一篇英语短文向英语俱乐部投稿。
寒假计划
学习
1.功课（作业、复习）
2.阅读（类型、原因）
兴趣
1.运动
2.艺术
其他
1.旅游
2.要求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2）必须包括…中所有要点内容，并适当发挥；
3）词数：100
词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
my
plan
for
the
winter
holiday
winter
holiday
is
coming.
here
is
my
plan
for
the
winter
holiday.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【满分范文】
my
plan
for
the
winter
holiday
winter
holiday
is
coming.
here
is
my
plan
for
the
winter
holiday.
first,
i’ll
keep
on
doing
some
sports
such
as
playing
ping-pong
and
running.
i
think
they
are
good
for
my
health.
next,
i
hope
to
relax
by
reading
some
books
and
watching
tv.
what’s
more,
i
must
finish
the
exercises
left
by
teachers,
because
i
will
go
to
see
my
grandparents
with
mom
and
dad.
i
miss
them
very
much.
so
do
they.
finally,
i
would
like
to
travel
somewhere
interesting
with
my
parents.
probably
i’ll
go
to
hainan.
i
want
to
enjoy
the
beautiful
beaches
there.
this
is
my
plan
for
the
winter
holiday.
i’m
looking
forward
to
my
happy
winter
holiday!
【解析】
题干解读：本题列出了详细的思维导图，可以根据这篇思维导图来完成自己的文章，可以按照思维导图的形式来分段，本文是写自己的寒假计划，所以时态注意要用将来时。
例文点评：本文按照自己的顺序详细地描述了自己的寒假计划，过渡词用的很好，并且时态也是根据作者所需作出了适当的变化，条理清晰，文笔流畅。
高分亮点：
短语：keep
on；good
for；what’s
more；would
like
to
句型：i
miss
them
very
much.
so
do
they.
finally,
i
would
like
to
travel
somewhere
interesting
with
my
parents.
（七）
write
at
least
60
words
on
the
topic“weekend
or
not？“according
to
the
information
given．（阅读以下内容，并以
“这是汤姆的周末吗？“为题写一篇不少于
60
个词的短文，标点符号不占格．）
如今，很多孩子在父母的安排下没有了自己的周末，如下图中的
tom，请分析图中的这种现象并谈谈你的看法，以
weekend
or
not？为题写一篇不少于
60
个词的英语短文，向
parents
杂志投稿，让父母们通过阅读你的文章能有所启发．要求：
1．简单描述“tom“的周末状态、提出你的具体想法并给出建议；
2．短文中不得出现“tom“以外的人名或任何校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分．
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【满分范文】
weekend
or
not？
tom
has
to
attend
lots
of
classes
at
weekends．
he
has
little
time
for
his
favorite
sport﹣soccer．
still，
his
parents
are
pushing
him
to
do
more
math
exercises，
which
worries
him
a
lot．（要点一，汤姆的周末）nowadays，
many
students
are
under
much
pressure
like
tom．
their
parents
believe
it
is
necessary
for
them
to
make
full
use
of
the
weekends
and
learn
as
much
as
possible（高分句型一）．
as
a
result，
some
students
are
stressed
out
and
therefore
lose
interest
in
learning
anything．（高分句型二）
what
is
worse，they
may
not
be
able
to
learn
to
manage
their
own
life．（要点二，大多数孩子的周末）
i
do
hope
all
the
children
can
have
the
freedom
to
choose
what
they
like
to
do
and
enjoy
their
weekends．
（要点三，自己的观点）
（八）
为抗击新型冠状病毒（ncp），此次寒假我们必须呆在家里，假如你是alice，作为九年级1班的班长，请给你班的同学们写一封信．建议他们不要烦躁，可以在家做一些放松的活动来保证身心健康，并针对如何在上网课期间，取得更大进步给予建议．
写作要点：
1．
不要焦虑，我们将尽快重返校园．
2．
可以在家进行放松的活动：
（1）阅读，听音乐，下棋．
（2）室内活动（如做眼保健操）．
3．
针对如何在上网课期间，取得更大进步，给予同学们建议．
写作要求：
（1）不得使用真实的姓名和学校名．
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯．
（3）字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰．
（4）至少80词．
dear
classmates，
how
is
everything
going?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
best
wishes!
yours，
alice
【满分范文】
dear
classmates，
how
is
everything
going？
don＇t
worry．
it＇s
a
special
winter
holiday
because
of
ncp．
everyone
must
stay
at
home
to
prevent
it．we
will
go
back
to
school
as
soon
as
possible．（不要焦虑，我们将尽快重返校园）
i
think
reading，
listening
to
music
or
playing
chess
can
make
you
relax
if
you
feel
depressed
and
bored．
【高分句型一】spending
some
time
doing
indoor
exercise
is
necessary，
such
as
doing
eye
exercises．（在家进行放松的活动）
in
the
special
period，
online
teaching
is
carried
out
every
day．
you
are
supposed
to
be
on
time
on
weekdays．
it
is
necessary
for
you
to
have
a
quiet
learning
environment．【高分句型二】clean
up
any
distraction
on
the
table
before
class．
during
the
class，
write
down
the
key
points
of
the
knowledge
and
the
difficult
parts
that
you
don＇t
understand．
you
can
ask
for
advice
through
wechat，
qq
or
other
ways
as
soon
as
possible．
while
studying
hard，
don＇t
forget
to
exercise．
stretching
your
body
is
also
useful．（针对如何在上网课期间，取得更大进步，给予同学们建议）
we
believe
winter
will
finally
pass，
and
spring
is
sure
to
come．
i＇m
looking
forward
to
seeing
you
soon．
best
wishes!
yours，
alice
（九）
近日，某校开展了“志愿者日“的活动，鼓励同学们利用周末走出校园，尽自己所能为所在的社区做一些力所能及的事情。并随机给100名同学发放了调查问卷，下图是调查问卷的统计结果。
go
to
old
people
home
visit
sick
children
in
the
hospital
clean
up
the
parks
in
the
community
请你用两段话写一篇短文，第一段简要说明图表内容，第二段从图表中选出符合你实际的一项，结合自己的经历，谈谈你的志愿者日是如何度过的。
要求：1．词数不少于80词；
2．开头已给出，不计入总词数。
recently,
a
survey
was
done
among
100
students
in
a
school
about
how
students
spent
the
volunteer
day
on
weekends．
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________
【满分范文】
recently,
a
survey
was
done
among
100
students
in
a
school
about
how
students
spent
the
volunteer
day
on
weekends．
here
is
the
result．
25%
of
the
students
chose
to
help
clean
up
the
parks
in
the
community．
30%
of
the
students
spent
their
weekends
visiting
sick
children
in
the
hospital．
（高分句型一）nearly
half
of
the
students
went
to
old
people’s
home
to
visit
the
old
people
there．（简要说明图标内容）
last
sunday，
i
went
to
old
people’s
home
with
my
friends
lucy
and
sam．
we
cleaned
the
rooms
for
the
old
people
and
told
them
many
interesting
things
in
our
school．
they
told
us
stories
about
the
past
and
how
things
used
to
be．
lucy
and
i
are
both
good
at
singing，
so
we
sang
for
them．
they
were
so
happy
and
sang
along
with
us．
an
old
grandpa
also
taught
us
how
to
play
kung
fu．（高分句型二）
sam
likes
telling
jokes
and
his
jokes
made
the
old
people
laugh
happily．
it
was
a
really
meaningful
sunday．（结合自己去敬老院的经历）
in
a
word，
volunteering
is
really
a
great
experience
for
us．
we
can
get
such
a
strong
feeling
of
satisfaction
from
helping
others．（总结与心得）
（十）
某校正在开展“走进新时代，争当合格中学生“的演讲比赛，请以“we
act，we
improve“为主题，写一篇演讲稿，谈谈中学生除了学习课本知识之外，还应该做些什么？
演讲稿应包括以下内容：
（1）学会自立，诚实友善，举止文明；
（2）培养习惯，发展兴趣，不断创新；
（3）关心他人，和谐相处，懂得感恩；
（4）……
要求：（1）要点齐全，并适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实的姓名与校名；
（3）卷面整洁，书写美观，可适当加
2﹣3
分；
（4）词数：90
词左右．开头部分已给出，不计入总词数．
ladies
and
gentlemen，
we
have
entered
a
new
area．as
students，______________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【满分范文】
ladies
and
gentlemen，
we
have
entered
a
new
area．
as
students，
it’s
our
duty
to
study
hard．
but
to
be
a
qualified
middle
school
student，
i
think
we
have
a
lot
of
things
to
do．（点题）
first，
we
should
learn
to
be
independent
and
honest．
we’re
supposed
to
be
friendly
to
others
and
behave
politely
in
public．【高分句型一】
second，
we
should
have
good
habits．
habits
play
an
important
role
in
our
life．
we’d
better
develop
our
interests
and
the
ability
to
create．
【高分句型二】third，
we
should
care
more
about
others
and
be
thankful
to
all
the
people
who
have
helped
us．
value
the
time
we
spend
with
our
family
and
friends
in
our
daily
life．
last
but
not
least，
i
think
we
should
exercise
more
to
keep
healthy．（应该做什么）
in
a
word，
the
more
we
act，
the
better
we
will
improve．（总结全文）
（十一）
中学生课后活动丰富多彩，你最喜欢的是什么，请选择其中一项，根据以下提示，以“an
after-school
activity“为题，写一篇
80
词左右的短文，与同学们分享。
要点：1．你最喜欢的课后活动是什么，及课后活动的时间、地点；
2．谈谈其给你带来的益处；
3．你的建议。
要求：1．内容必须包括所给要点，可适当发挥，增加细节，以使行文连贯。
2．语篇完整，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范。
3．文中不能出现人名、校名或地名，否则不予评分。
an
after-school
activity
there
are
many
after-school
activities．
i
like
_______________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【满分范文】
an
after-school
activity
students
in
middle
schools
have
many
kinds
of
after﹣school
activities．maybe
they
do
sports，go
hiking，watch
tv
or
surf
on
the
internet．even
some
students
put
all
their
free
time
into
studying
the
textbook
knowledge．but
my
favorite
after﹣school
activity
is
collecting
stamps．let
me
tell
you
the
reason．（我最喜欢的课外活动）
first，i
can
learn
a
lot
from
the
stamps．there
are
many
chinese
cultures
in
the
stamps【高分句型一】．when
i
collect
them，i
can
learn
more
about
my
motherland【高分句型二】．second，i
can
make
more
friends．many
students
love
collecting
stamps．because
of
the
same
hobbies
and
interests，we
can
talk
and
do
the
same
things．then
we
can
be
good
friends．（带来的益处）
in
a
word，after-school
activities
can
make
us
relax．you
can
take
up
a
hobby
that
you
like．
why
not
join
in
it？（建议）《2020中考英语作文：素质教育》出自：爱游戏全站app官网入口-爱游戏app官网入口
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素质教育篇
（一）
根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
假如你是李华，你们学校正在开展“安全月”宣传活动，倡议大家制作关于安全教育的主题海报，你们班交换生peter给你发邮件询问相关事情。请用英语回复一封邮件，告诉他海报上交的时间，并分享你设计海报的一些想法。
提示词语：design，safety
rule，careful，protect，picture
提示问题：when
should
you
hand
in
the
poster?what
would
you
like
to
share
with
peter
about
designing
the
poster?
dear
peter,
i＇m
glad
to
receive
your
______________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
if
there
is
anything
more
that
i
can
help
with,
please
let
me
know.
yours,
li
hua
【写作思路】
这篇作文要求我们以李华的身份给peter写一封邮件，告诉他关于制作关于安全教育的主题海报的相关事宜。由题目中给出的提示问题可知，短文中应包括以下内容：首先告诉peter海报上交的时间；然后和他分享一些设计海报的想法。第二个内容应该是短文的主体。题目中并没有规定具体的写作内容，学生们应联系自己的实际生活，展开合理的想象，将这些内容补充完整后，用正确的英语表达出来，这是写作中的一个难点。短文应以一般现在时为主、第一、二人称来叙述。写作时应注意：首先要合理安排短文内容，叙述应有层次、有条理。可以使用一些表示先后顺序的词或短语，如first,
second,
last
but
not
least等等。题目中给出的提示词应该在短文中用上。其次应注意文章的表达，英语句式的结构与汉语是不同的，因此不能根据汉语思维逐词翻译，应该从句式的整体考虑，先确定主干结构，然后添加修饰成分。为提升作文档次，应注意使用一些高级词汇、短语以及复合句、非谓语动词等复杂结构。同时语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意上下连贯，表达流畅。
【满分范文】
dear
peter,
i＇m
glad
to
receive
your
email.
as
it
is
required，you
are
supposed
to
hand
in
the
poster
before
next
friday.
being
your
close
friend，i
am
extremely
willing
to
share
some
ideas
about
designing
the
poster
with
you.
first
and
foremost，the
basic
safety
rules
are
of
great
importance，which
should
be
included
in
your
poster.
in
the
second
place，following
the
safety
rules
is
so
meaningful
and
crucial
that
you
had
better
remind
your
readers
of
its
significance
and
advise
them
to
be
careful
both
in
and
out
of
school.
last
but
by
no
means
least，if
i
were
you，i
would
add
a
few
suggestions
about
safety
awareness，considering
that
better
safe
than
sorry.
in
addition，it
is
a
good
idea
for
you
to
draw
a
few
pictures
on
your
poster
so
as
to
make
it
more
lively
and
acceptable.
if
there
is
anything
more
that
i
can
help
with,
please
let
me
know.
yours,
li
hua
【名师点评】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，给peter写邮件，告诉他制作主题海报的一些事情。短文有以下几个优点：首先文章内容完整，结构清晰，符合题目要求。除题目中给出的开头和结尾，短文主要包括两个内容：第一段用一句话告诉peter上交海报的时间；文章的中心和重点是放在了第二段上，这一段中作者和peter分享了一些制作海报的想法。主要从四个方面进行阐述，内容非常详实，并使用了first
and
foremost,
in
the
second
place,
last
but
by
no
means
least,
in
addition等短语，分清了这一段的层次，叙述非常有条理。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确，并使用了较复杂的句式结构，表现了作者较强的语言运用能力。短文中较好的句型有：being
your
close
friend，i
am
extremely
willing
to
share
some
ideas
about
designing
the
poster
with
you.、in
the
second
place，following
the
safety
rules
is
so
meaningful
and
crucial
that
you
had
better
remind
your
readers
of
its
significance
and
advise
them
to
be
careful
both
in
and
out
of
school、in
addition，it
is
a
good
idea
for
you
to
draw
a
few
pictures
on
your
poster
so
as
to
make
it
more
lively
and
acceptable.等。
（二）
日前某校进行了题为“有压力向谁说”的问卷调查（结果如图），请你根据要求写一篇英语短文参加该校的征文活动。向老师倾诉
向朋友倾诉
向家长倾诉
不跟任何人说
内容包括：1.
简要描述调查结果；
2.
你喜欢向谁倾诉压力？为什么？
3.
提出2条缓解压力的建议。
要求：1.
文章必须包括所给要点，但不要逐条翻译，可进行适当拓展；
2.
书写规范，80—100词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3.
文中不得出现真实校名、人名。
when
teens
have
stress,
they
will
talk
about
their
stress
to
different
people.
here
are
the
results
about
our
survey.
______________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【满分范文】
when
teens
have
stress,
they
will
talk
about
their
stress
to
different
people.
here
are
the
results
about
our
survey.
thirty-five
percent
of
students
will
talk
about
their
stress
to
their
teachers,
forty
percent
of
students
will
talk
to
their
friends,
only
fifteen
percent
of
students
talk
to
their
parents
but
only
ten
percent
of
students
talk
to
nobody.
for
me,
i
like
to
tell
my
friends
about
the
pressure,
because
we
are
all
the
same
age,
they
sometimes
feel
the
same
as
us
.and
we
can
communicate
with
and
understand
each
other
easily.
but
as
a
student,
we
should
learn
to
relieve
stress.
first
of
all,
we
should
properly
face
the
pressure.?stress
is
everywhere
in
our
daily
life,
so
we
can＇t
be
afraid
of
them
and
try
our
best
to
deal
with
them.
secondly,
we
can
listen
to
light
music
or
do
some
proper
sports,
which
can
let
us
relax.
finally,
believe
in
yourself.
we
should
believe
in
ourselves.
we
can
deal
with
any
trouble
with
the
help
of
ourselves
or
others.
stress
is
everywhere
and
we
must
face
the
pressure
properly.
【解析】
1.
题干解读：本篇文章属于话题性＋图表型作文，根据图表内容说明不同的人对压力的诉说对象不同的情况，文中会较多的使用数字说明，做一个对比，然后阐述自己的压力喜欢对谁说以及原因，并且提出该如何缓解压力的几条建议。建议可以从自身实际出发，自己平时是如何缓解压力的可以一起分享。
2.
例文点评：文章采取三段式，第一段对图表内容进行阐述，以及阐述自己喜欢向谁诉说压力和为什么？第二段主要给出一些缓解压力的建议，第三段做一个总结，概括压力无处不在，但是要正视压力。文章结构完整。段落衔接很好，语言表达清晰准确，语句简单易懂。
3.
高分亮点：
短语：talk
about；the
same
as；communicate
with；deal
with；be
afraid
of。
句型：so引导的并列句；because引导的原因状语从句；
（三）
xxxx呼吁：“共同呵护好孩子的眼睛,让他们拥有一个光明的未来”,为此,学校
广播站邀请你写一篇关于保护视力的倡议书,请根据以下信息写一篇文章：
现
状
1.
越来越多的孩子带上了眼镜；2.
超过
70%的初中生近视；3.
父母和老师为此担忧；
原
因
1.
学习；2.
电子产品；3.
缺少睡眠；
建
议
1.
每天至少做两次眼保健操；
2.
多进行户外运动；
3.
健康饮食；
……
视力差：have
poor
eyesight
要求：
1.
所写内容必须包括以上表格提供的所有信息,并适当发挥；
2.
文章不少于
90
词,开头已给出,不计入总词数；
3.
语意通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范；
4.
文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。
poor
eyesight
is
a
serious
problem
among
the
youth
of
our
country.
it’s
amazing
that
the
situation
is
going
from
bad
to
worse.
it
is
time
that
we
take
the
problem
seriously.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【满分范文】
poor
eyesight
is
a
serious
problem
among
the
youth
of
our
country.
it’s
amazing
that
the
situation
is
going
from
bad
to
worse.
it
is
time
that
we
take
the
problem
seriously.
at
present,
more
and
more
students
wear
glasses,
over
70
%
of
the
middle
school
students
have
poor
eyesight.
both
parents
and
teachers
are
worried
about
it.
here
are
some
main
causes.
first,
some
students
spend
too
much
time
reading
or
doing
their
homework
without
a
rest.
second,
some
students
even
like
to
watch
tv
or
use
computers
for
a
long
time.third,
some
students
may
not
have
enough
sleep.
in
order
to
have
good
eyesight,
we
should
do
eye
exercises
at
least
twice
a
day.
we
can
also
try
to
do
more
sports
in
our
spare
time.
we
had
better
eat
healthy
food.
of
course,
it
is
important
to
have
a
good
habit
of
using
our
eyes.
for
example,
we
shouldn’t
read
in
the
sun
or
in
bed.
i
think
all
of
us
should
understand
the
importance
of
protecting
eyes
and
try
our
best
to
protect
them.
【解析】
题干分析：这是一篇要求写一篇关于保护视力的倡议书，响应xxxx呼吁：“共同呵护好孩子的眼睛,让他们拥有一个光明的未来”，观察提示表格，写作内容要包括目前的现在，还有产生这些问题的原因，已经提出的相关建议。
例文点评：这是一篇优秀的例文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确的运用的时态，例文中运用的是一般现在时。例文第一段首先提出了目前我国青少年视力不良的社会问题；第二段详细的介绍了产生问题的三点原因；第三段提出有效的建议，号召保护视力。例文还使用了一些亮点词句，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。
高分亮点：
短语：at
present目前；more
and
more越来越多；be
worried
about担心；too
much太多；like
to
do
sth喜欢做某事；in
order
to
sth为了做某事；at
least至少；try
one’s
best
to
do
sth尽某人最大努力做某事；eye
exercises眼保健操；in
one’s
spare
time在某人空闲时间。
句型：（1）first,
some
students
spend
too
much
time
reading
or
doing
their
homework
without
a
rest.
sb.
spend
time
(in)
doing
sth某人花费时间做某事；（2）of
course,
it
is
important
to
have
a
good
habit
of
using
our
eyes.
it
is
adj.
(for
sb.)
to
do
sth(对某人来说)做某事时怎样的。
（四）
假如你是李华，你的表妹lily面对即将到来的期末考试，压力很大，这几天甚至出现了失眠的状况，请你给她写一封电子邮件，帮助她尽快调整好状态迎接考试。
提示词：
relaxed；
music；
exercise；
believe
in
要求:
1.
参考提示词,可适当发挥
2.
语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整；
3.
文中不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名、地名等)
4.
词数：不少于70词。(开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。)
dear
lily,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
yours,li
hua
【满分范文】
dear
lily,
i＇m
sorry
that
i
heard
from
you.
i
think
proper
pressure
is
normal,
because
exams
are
important
for
us.
this
happened
to
me.
let
me
tell
you
about
my
advice.
you
can
do
something
you
like
to
relax
yourself.
for
example,
i
like
to
listen
to
music
because
some
soft
music
can
help
us
relax.
i
exercise
regularly
to
increase
my
ability
to
work
under
pressure.
we
have
to
learn
to
believe
in
ourselves.
if
you
think
these
suggestions
is
good
for
you
,you
can
have
a
try.
i
hope
my
suggestions
can
help
you.
yours,li
hua
【解析】
1.题干解读：该题目属于信件写作，要求根据来信写回信，信件内容应该完整地给出相关建议，帮助她尽快调整好状态迎接考试。适当使用副词和连词等增加亮点。写好时，再阅读一遍，减少语法错误，不要犯单词拼写上的错误。
2.例文点评：这是一篇优秀的例文，完整地给出相关缓解考试压力的建议，避免出现累赘。例文结构清晰，行文连贯，恰当地运用了副词和连词等用以过渡，增强了整篇文章的逻辑关系。
3.高分亮点：词组：heard
from；proper
pressure；my
advice；relax
yourself；soft
music；exercise
regularly；believe
in
ourselves；is
good
for等；
句型：
i
think
proper
pressure
is
normal,
because
exams
are
important
for
us.
/let
me
tell
you
about
my
advice./for
example,
i
like
to
listen
to
music
because
some
soft
music
can
help
us
relax.
/if
you
think
these
suggestions
is
good
for
you
,you
can
have
a
try
./i
hope
my
suggestions
can
help
you.
【点睛】
书面表达：
首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如heard
from；proper
pressure；my
advice；relax
yourself；soft
music；exercise
regularly；believe
in
ourselves；等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅，如however；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
（五）
今年3月5号学雷锋纪念日，你校组织志愿者去夕阳红敬老院开展“学雷锋，送温暖”活动。假如你是学生张华，请将活动情况介绍给你的美国笔友ben，分享这次美好的经历。
活动时间
3月5日
活动地点
夕阳红敬老院（xiyanghong
nursing
home)
参加人员
学校志愿者活动内容
1.
送鲜花和水果
2.帮助打扫卫生
3.……
活动感想
1.关爱和尊重老人2.
……..要求：
(1)表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
(2)必须包括表格中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥；
(3)词数：100左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
(4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
dear
ben,
thank
you
for
your
last
email.
let
me
tell
you
what
we
did
in
our
school
on
march
5.
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
i＇d
like
to
hear
about
volunteering
work
in
your
school.
best
wishes,
zhang
hua
【满分范文】
dear
ben,
thank
you
for
your
last
email.
let
me
tell
you
what
we
did
in
our
school
on
march
5.
as
soon
as
we
got
to
xiyanghong
nursing
home,
people
there
gave
us
a
warm
welcome.
the
elderly
people
were
very
excited
to
see
us.
we
brought
some
flowers
and
fruits
to
them.
then,
we
cleaned
the
windows
and
swept
the
floor
for
them.
after
that,
some
of
us
took
a
walk
with
them,
chatted
with
each
other
and
some
of
us
played
chess
with
them.
when
it
was
time
for
us
volunteers
to
leave,
they
were
thankful
for
our
kindness
and
they
felt
somewhat
sad.
i
promise
to
myself
that
i
will
go
to
see
them
whenever
i＇m
free.
we
should
care
for
the
elderly
people
and
respect
them.
i＇d
like
to
hear
about
volunteering
work
in
your
school.
best
wishes,
zhang
hua
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文，你校组织志愿者去夕阳红敬老院开展“学雷锋，送温暖”活动。假如你是学生张华，请将活动情况介绍给你的美国笔友ben，分享这次美好的经历。。首先要认真审题，根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。
2.例文点评：本文时态为一般过去时态，人称主要为第一人称。文章紧扣题目要点，内容完整，表述准确，语言的表述符合语法的结构，造句符合英语的表达习惯。
3.高分亮点：
短语：as
soon
as
；
get
to；give
sb.
a
warm
welcome；bring
sth.
to
sb.；take
a
walk
with
sb.；be
thankful
for…
句型：as
soon
as
we
got
to
xiyanghong
nursing
home,
people
there
gave
us
a
warm
welcome.；when
it
was
time
for
us
volunteers
to
leave,
they
were
thankful
for
our
kindness
and
they
felt
somewhat
sad.
（六）
寒假即将来临，你一定有你的寒假计划吧？你校英语俱乐部开展了以“my
plan
for
the
winter
holiday”为主题的征文活动，请根据下面的思维导图，写一篇英语短文向英语俱乐部投稿。
寒假计划
学习
1.功课（作业、复习）
2.阅读（类型、原因）
兴趣
1.运动
2.艺术
其他
1.旅游
2.要求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2）必须包括…中所有要点内容，并适当发挥；
3）词数：100
词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
my
plan
for
the
winter
holiday
winter
holiday
is
coming.
here
is
my
plan
for
the
winter
holiday.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【满分范文】
my
plan
for
the
winter
holiday
winter
holiday
is
coming.
here
is
my
plan
for
the
winter
holiday.
first,
i’ll
keep
on
doing
some
sports
such
as
playing
ping-pong
and
running.
i
think
they
are
good
for
my
health.
next,
i
hope
to
relax
by
reading
some
books
and
watching
tv.
what’s
more,
i
must
finish
the
exercises
left
by
teachers,
because
i
will
go
to
see
my
grandparents
with
mom
and
dad.
i
miss
them
very
much.
so
do
they.
finally,
i
would
like
to
travel
somewhere
interesting
with
my
parents.
probably
i’ll
go
to
hainan.
i
want
to
enjoy
the
beautiful
beaches
there.
this
is
my
plan
for
the
winter
holiday.
i’m
looking
forward
to
my
happy
winter
holiday!
【解析】
题干解读：本题列出了详细的思维导图，可以根据这篇思维导图来完成自己的文章，可以按照思维导图的形式来分段，本文是写自己的寒假计划，所以时态注意要用将来时。
例文点评：本文按照自己的顺序详细地描述了自己的寒假计划，过渡词用的很好，并且时态也是根据作者所需作出了适当的变化，条理清晰，文笔流畅。
高分亮点：
短语：keep
on；good
for；what’s
more；would
like
to
句型：i
miss
them
very
much.
so
do
they.
finally,
i
would
like
to
travel
somewhere
interesting
with
my
parents.
（七）
write
at
least
60
words
on
the
topic“weekend
or
not？“according
to
the
information
given．（阅读以下内容，并以
“这是汤姆的周末吗？“为题写一篇不少于
60
个词的短文，标点符号不占格．）
如今，很多孩子在父母的安排下没有了自己的周末，如下图中的
tom，请分析图中的这种现象并谈谈你的看法，以
weekend
or
not？为题写一篇不少于
60
个词的英语短文，向
parents
杂志投稿，让父母们通过阅读你的文章能有所启发．要求：
1．简单描述“tom“的周末状态、提出你的具体想法并给出建议；
2．短文中不得出现“tom“以外的人名或任何校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分．
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【满分范文】
weekend
or
not？
tom
has
to
attend
lots
of
classes
at
weekends．
he
has
little
time
for
his
favorite
sport﹣soccer．
still，
his
parents
are
pushing
him
to
do
more
math
exercises，
which
worries
him
a
lot．（要点一，汤姆的周末）nowadays，
many
students
are
under
much
pressure
like
tom．
their
parents
believe
it
is
necessary
for
them
to
make
full
use
of
the
weekends
and
learn
as
much
as
possible（高分句型一）．
as
a
result，
some
students
are
stressed
out
and
therefore
lose
interest
in
learning
anything．（高分句型二）
what
is
worse，they
may
not
be
able
to
learn
to
manage
their
own
life．（要点二，大多数孩子的周末）
i
do
hope
all
the
children
can
have
the
freedom
to
choose
what
they
like
to
do
and
enjoy
their
weekends．
（要点三，自己的观点）
（八）
为抗击新型冠状病毒（ncp），此次寒假我们必须呆在家里，假如你是alice，作为九年级1班的班长，请给你班的同学们写一封信．建议他们不要烦躁，可以在家做一些放松的活动来保证身心健康，并针对如何在上网课期间，取得更大进步给予建议．
写作要点：
1．
不要焦虑，我们将尽快重返校园．
2．
可以在家进行放松的活动：
（1）阅读，听音乐，下棋．
（2）室内活动（如做眼保健操）．
3．
针对如何在上网课期间，取得更大进步，给予同学们建议．
写作要求：
（1）不得使用真实的姓名和学校名．
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯．
（3）字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰．
（4）至少80词．
dear
classmates，
how
is
everything
going?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
best
wishes!
yours，
alice
【满分范文】
dear
classmates，
how
is
everything
going？
don＇t
worry．
it＇s
a
special
winter
holiday
because
of
ncp．
everyone
must
stay
at
home
to
prevent
it．we
will
go
back
to
school
as
soon
as
possible．（不要焦虑，我们将尽快重返校园）
i
think
reading，
listening
to
music
or
playing
chess
can
make
you
relax
if
you
feel
depressed
and
bored．
【高分句型一】spending
some
time
doing
indoor
exercise
is
necessary，
such
as
doing
eye
exercises．（在家进行放松的活动）
in
the
special
period，
online
teaching
is
carried
out
every
day．
you
are
supposed
to
be
on
time
on
weekdays．
it
is
necessary
for
you
to
have
a
quiet
learning
environment．【高分句型二】clean
up
any
distraction
on
the
table
before
class．
during
the
class，
write
down
the
key
points
of
the
knowledge
and
the
difficult
parts
that
you
don＇t
understand．
you
can
ask
for
advice
through
wechat，
or
other
ways
as
soon
as
possible．
while
studying
hard，
don＇t
forget
to
exercise．
stretching
your
body
is
also
useful．（针对如何在上网课期间，取得更大进步，给予同学们建议）
we
believe
winter
will
finally
pass，
and
spring
is
sure
to
come．
i＇m
looking
forward
to
seeing
you
soon．
best
wishes!
yours，
alice
（九）
近日，某校开展了“志愿者日“的活动，鼓励同学们利用周末走出校园，尽自己所能为所在的社区做一些力所能及的事情。并随机给100名同学发放了调查问卷，下图是调查问卷的统计结果。
go
to
old
people
home
visit
sick
children
in
the
hospital
clean
up
the
parks
in
the
community
请你用两段话写一篇短文，第一段简要说明图表内容，第二段从图表中选出符合你实际的一项，结合自己的经历，谈谈你的志愿者日是如何度过的。
要求：1．词数不少于80词；
2．开头已给出，不计入总词数。
recently,
a
survey
was
done
among
100
students
in
a
school
about
how
students
spent
the
volunteer
day
on
weekends．
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________
【满分范文】
recently,
a
survey
was
done
among
100
students
in
a
school
about
how
students
spent
the
volunteer
day
on
weekends．
here
is
the
result．
25%
of
the
students
chose
to
help
clean
up
the
parks
in
the
community．
30%
of
the
students
spent
their
weekends
visiting
sick
children
in
the
hospital．
（高分句型一）nearly
half
of
the
students
went
to
old
people’s
home
to
visit
the
old
people
there．（简要说明图标内容）
last
sunday，
i
went
to
old
people’s
home
with
my
friends
lucy
and
sam．
we
cleaned
the
rooms
for
the
old
people
and
told
them
many
interesting
things
in
our
school．
they
told
us
stories
about
the
past
and
how
things
used
to
be．
lucy
and
i
are
both
good
at
singing，
so
we
sang
for
them．
they
were
so
happy
and
sang
along
with
us．
an
old
grandpa
also
taught
us
how
to
play
kung
fu．（高分句型二）
sam
likes
telling
jokes
and
his
jokes
made
the
old
people
laugh
happily．
it
was
a
really
meaningful
sunday．（结合自己去敬老院的经历）
in
a
word，
volunteering
is
really
a
great
experience
for
us．
we
can
get
such
a
strong
feeling
of
satisfaction
from
helping
others．（总结与心得）
（十）
某校正在开展“走进新时代，争当合格中学生“的演讲比赛，请以“we
act，we
improve“为主题，写一篇演讲稿，谈谈中学生除了学习课本知识之外，还应该做些什么？
演讲稿应包括以下内容：
（1）学会自立，诚实友善，举止文明；
（2）培养习惯，发展兴趣，不断创新；
（3）关心他人，和谐相处，懂得感恩；
（4）……
要求：（1）要点齐全，并适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实的姓名与校名；
（3）卷面整洁，书写美观，可适当加
2﹣3
分；
（4）词数：90
词左右．开头部分已给出，不计入总词数．
ladies
and
gentlemen，
we
have
entered
a
new
area．as
students，______________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【满分范文】
ladies
and
gentlemen，
we
have
entered
a
new
area．
as
students，
it’s
our
duty
to
study
hard．
but
to
be
a
qualified
middle
school
student，
i
think
we
have
a
lot
of
things
to
do．（点题）
first，
we
should
learn
to
be
independent
and
honest．
we’re
supposed
to
be
friendly
to
others
and
behave
politely
in
public．【高分句型一】
second，
we
should
have
good
habits．
habits
play
an
important
role
in
our
life．
we’d
better
develop
our
interests
and
the
ability
to
create．
【高分句型二】third，
we
should
care
more
about
others
and
be
thankful
to
all
the
people
who
have
helped
us．
value
the
time
we
spend
with
our
family
and
friends
in
our
daily
life．
last
but
not
least，
i
think
we
should
exercise
more
to
keep
healthy．（应该做什么）
in
a
word，
the
more
we
act，
the
better
we
will
improve．（总结全文）
（十一）
中学生课后活动丰富多彩，你最喜欢的是什么，请选择其中一项，根据以下提示，以“an
after-school
activity“为题，写一篇
80
词左右的短文，与同学们分享。
要点：1．你最喜欢的课后活动是什么，及课后活动的时间、地点；
2．谈谈其给你带来的益处；
3．你的建议。
要求：1．内容必须包括所给要点，可适当发挥，增加细节，以使行文连贯。
2．语篇完整，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范。
3．文中不能出现人名、校名或地名，否则不予评分。
an
after-school
activity
there
are
many
after-school
activities．
i
like
_______________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【满分范文】
an
after-school
activity
students
in
middle
schools
have
many
kinds
of
after﹣school
activities．maybe
they
do
sports，go
hiking，watch
tv
or
surf
on
the
internet．even
some
students
put
all
their
free
time
into
studying
the
textbook
knowledge．but
my
favorite
after﹣school
activity
is
collecting
stamps．let
me
tell
you
the
reason．（我最喜欢的课外活动）
first，i
can
learn
a
lot
from
the
stamps．there
are
many
chinese
cultures
in
the
stamps【高分句型一】．when
i
collect
them，i
can
learn
more
about
my
motherland【高分句型二】．second，i
can
make
more
friends．many
students
love
collecting
stamps．because
of
the
same
hobbies
and
interests，we
can
talk
and
do
the
same
things．then
we
can
be
good
friends．（带来的益处）
in
a
word，after-school
activities
can
make
us
relax．you
can
take
up
a
hobby
that
you
like．
why
not
join
in
it？（建议）《2020中考英语作文：素质教育》出自：爱游戏全站app官网入口-爱游戏app官网入口
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